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aysmiles
Ayodele Arowosegbe
Nigeria, Ogun State, Ota,

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Woman

WOMAN
Invaluable and priceless
Yet looking powerless
Whenever we behold your sight
Our faces are full of smiles
Underneath your apparent weakness
Is a subtle strength
Though you are tender
You are full of power
Whenever you apply your force
Our passion is set on course
You are our other side
That balances our immense might
Setting the world into equilibrium
Beyond what we can fathom
It is a basic fact
That woman attracts man
Like magnet attracts iron
That is why she is strong.

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g9rocks64 Comment by: g9rocks64 - 2007-03-01 05:53
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"Setting the world into equilibrium"

Wow! Great poetry. Wonderful rhythm, not forced. The work flows well and is eloquent in expression. Again, I find you one of the best poets online!
ShatteredDreamer Comment by: ShatteredDreamer - 2006-12-04 12:07
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Impowering.
Empowering?
What's the word for it?
It was brilliant. I will get back to you with the right word when I think of it.
Onyenuchie Comment by: Onyenuchie - 2006-11-23 02:45
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great work! you are able to summarize truth in a very interesting way,
i love it.
thank you and keep it up.
number51 Comment by: number51 - 2006-11-22 10:39
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I like this it is so true
Women are the most important people that a
man can ever be close to
aysmiles Comment by: aysmiles - 2006-11-22 05:47
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Thanks for your comment. It shows i am really making an impact.
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