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BrianRoberts
Brian Roberts
United States, New Jersey, Lanoka Harbor

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The Searching

Searching on the internet
To find the beauty that I seek.
Searching every page I can
My heart is feeling very weak.
Searching for the perfect boy
The finest thing I've ever seen!
Searching for the perfect face
When will he show up on the screen?
Searching for the perfect smile
I know he's out there he must be.
Searching for the perfect eyes
Now nothing else matters to me!
Searching for the perfect skin
I need to find this boy right now!
Searching for the perfect charm
I wish he would appear somehow.
Searching for him earnestly
The boy I need just can't be found.
Searching for him endlessly
This boy's not anywhere around.
Searching for him desperately
I'll ache until I find the one!
Searching for him hopelessly
I must surrender, I am done.

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Comment by: - 2007-02-08 14:38
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I think this person... who was searching, was perhaps looking in all the wrong places. I hear myspace is a nice place to meet people. Lol. I've been caught up in the search as well a few times in my life. I feel for this person. :D
goodmoses Comment by: goodmoses - 2006-11-17 23:16
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Surrender doesn't sound half bad in this case. Interesting read. Didn't allow me to be bored.
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