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| Short and sweet but very effective. |
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| Thise poetry brings out the feeling of being totally and desperately alone. Something I think most of us have felt at certain times in life. Well written. |
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| This is a wondeful piece. How we can be so alone that it has no reason. But we just are. Great job!!! Keep up the writting. Julie |
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Comment by: Casper - 2007-02-24 14:24
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| Wow...I thought it was so good that I had my girlfriend read it...But she didn't like it as much as I did. |
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| this was utterly bleak. not the writing, just the emotion in it. I am guessing that is what you were going for. nicely done |
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