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fallingroses
Rosemarie Piemonte
United States, IL, Downers Grove

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Falling Roses

As your tear descends down your cheek like a falling rose
The pain in your heart feels like the thorn
Then there are more falling tears from your eyes
Falling Roses
Falling Roses
You never want to feel again.
But you will
And you do.

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jgilgun Comment by: jgilgun - 2008-02-23 09:40
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Hm. Nice. Thorns have roses, too. Keep at it. You've got important things to say. Dig deeper--come up with even sharper images.
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