writing community
Sign In Here | Lost Password | FREE Sign Up
E-mail: Password:
Remember login  
The place for writers:
Upload your writing in minutes, receive peer feedback from other writers, poets, authors, then get your work published out there in the real world.       Learn how other writers are doing it.

 
noodel
li'l ms. noodels
Canada, or, you know, somewhere on Pluto

Words: 153
Access: Public
Comments: 3

Forward to a friend
Print Version
E-mail this writer E-mail this user 
View Author profile
Add to Readers  




Matt - a character in discovery

'They just supply it ' the people are the only ones who can control how they're used. For all we know, some guy can use them to hunt squirrels.'

'What the hell kind of person have you ever seen shooting squirrels with a semi-automatic? That's such bullshit.'

Eric shrugged. 'My cousin Jeffrey does.'

Matt stopped for a moment and put the Swiss-army knife down. 'Wait, that guy with the tattoo of Julia Roberts on his...?'

'Uh huh.'

He tilted his head for a moment and kept carving. 'Oh, shit. Didn't they put him in an asylum last year?'

Eric shrugged and threw a chunk of snow at Matt's back. Matt flipped the knife shut and grabbed a handful of snow. 'Oh, no... Matthew... Matt, no! Ack!'

'You are so dead!'

Eric let out a shriek as Matt chased him down the street, the half-carved name on the tree left forgotten.

Want to comment on this Short Stories?
Sign up to Edit Red and you will be able to comment on Short Stories and get access to: Upload your own stories and poems, get readers and their feedback, promote your work...
Sign up






[Back to top]
Comments  
LauraBanks Comment by: LauraBanks - 2007-02-13 14:34
Add to Readers
      
I've always wondered what was the story behind the half-carved name in that tree. :)

It's a very well written chunk of story. Dialog and visuals are pristine.

He tilted his head for a moment and kept carving. Maybe he went back to carving, since earlier he put the knife down.
exnavy76 Comment by: exnavy76 - 2006-12-16 17:23
Add to Readers
      
This short story is interesting and held my interest. I found that I wanted to know more about these characters. I am also wondering where you were going with this character?
deathbyacid Comment by: deathbyacid - 2006-11-17 23:14
Add to Readers
      
i'd like to see were your heading with this.
1

Sponsored Ads


By noodel

Featured Writers

Advertising - Terms & Conditions - Short Story Submissions - Contact - Writing Competitions - Writing Links - Book Promotion - Sky-Tribe.com - alanemmins.com
  Member short stories, poems, comments and other contributions are owned by the poster.
Copyright 2003 - 2007 Edit Red I/S