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blueeyedthrill
crystal peckitt
United States, pennsylvania, allentown

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Letting Go Because Hanging On Might Take To Long...

So this is my "tangled web"...

Im letting go
because hanging on
might take too long

Im letting go
because in the end
you'll realized what you lost

Im letting go
because this friendship
has a big cost

Im letting go
because of the drama
that follows you

Im letting go
because i cant
stand to be near you

Im letting go
because i believe
your better off

Im letting go
because your life
is not mine

Im letting go
because your mistakes
are too many

Im letting go
because you have
clearly moved on

Im letting go
because im tired of
the stupid promises

Im letting go
because the wait
might just kill me

Im letting go
because i know
its best for you

Im letting go
because its whats
best for me too

Im letting go
because your new
life doesnt include me

Im letting go
because deep down i know
you'll only use me

Im letting go
because you have
already let me go

Im letting go
because leading you on
would be wrong

Im letting go
because life is warm
and you make it cold

Im letting go
because its the
right thing to do

Im letting go
because then you'll
never know

Im letting go
because you dont
make the effort

Im letting go
because you mean
too much to keep

Im letting go
because you
deserve to be free

Im letting go
because i deserve
to be free

Im letting go
because if it was meant
to be it would be

Im letting go
because holding on
breaks my heart

Im letting go
because we never
really started

Im letting go
because we never
had a chance

Im letting go
because your new life
needs you

Im letting go
because holding on
might take to long

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lasttoknow Comment by: lasttoknow - 2006-11-20 18:25
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this all sounds too familiar. like i've been here before. not staring into the face of a stranger. becaus you and i are going through this together.
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