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Palace of Sands
Patiently I wait among
Cherry blossoms
The beautiful scene of your feet in the sands
Coming to meet me in the middle
Of the paradise we called our own.
In the death of our relationship,
The waves washed the castle clean
A fresh way to start over
And a new memories to be built
In a palace of sand along the shore
In the revival of my love for you
And the new ways of love that we have
Discovered
I leaned on the truth and the foundation
The trust that was before
Hidden in washed away sand and pebbles
At my feet, where you embrace me
I find a serenity in my heart
Where you once sat so delicately
Stepping on egg shells, explosion
Inevitable.
Now there is a lightness, comfortable
In the throne you sit upon
Inside the palace of my heart
On the shore
Where waves crash
Where you embrace me
And we meet in the middle
Of paradise.
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"stepping on egg shells explosion inevitable"
really like that like. Lines that use ordinaryobjects to describe extraodinary events in our lives always draw me in.
Lovely poem. |
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Comment by: Esquire - 2007-02-14 18:17
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| If I am not mistaken, the person to have written this poem is one of a gentle and soft nature... You write beautifully, well done! |
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Comment by: - 2007-02-13 22:10
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this is beautiful!
I realy enjoyed this, one of my favorites. ;) |
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Wow! Let me catch my breath a second...
Captivating imagery here my Dear. You had me from the first line and I had to keep reading. This is poetry at it's finest. Well written, with nice structure and flow.
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Poetically Always Ashley |
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Comment by: - 2007-02-10 22:37
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"The waves washed the castle clean
A fresh way to start over
And a new memories to be built
In a palace of sand along the shore"
I am the Sun and you are the Sea. |
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