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I Made a Mistake
Written: 11/12/2005
I made a mistake
Formed in solitude
Arranged by exclusion
Concieved for correction
I made a mistake
Can't take it back
Neither white out nor delete
Can eradicate my act
I made a mistake
Caused damage to victiums
Caused karma, regret
Blame, judgment, enstrangement
I made a mistake
Can't take it back
Does it yet breathe
The air you lack
Do you allow it
Restrain on your future
I need allow it
Only to pass
Copyright 2005, All Rights Reserved
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| No, isismarie, we can't take it back. But when forgiven, it is (should be) as if it never took place. |
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| This is really cool. I like that you are able to capture the human error in it. I would say that no matter what mistakes we make in life, we can't take them back, but in the end, its the remorse that means the most. Good job. |
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This is getting a bit too obvious, we need to cover our trax. Why don't we meet at .....
Seriously, though, I only wish I had these words when I was younger! |
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Comment by: Valerie - 2006-01-04 19:10
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Thanks for your comments. I am going to be sure to read all of your works.
This is a great poem. |
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| Yall know sumpthang - THIS IS TOO COOL ... just imagine that someone is upset with you because of some STUPID lame f*cked up thing you did ... Just send them to this page!! By the way, I did ... hi Philena! |
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