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aribaby
Erin Hune Glover
United States, KY, Lexington

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Thanksgiving

The forbidden one would taste like cranberries,
but he moves close, then away,
loyalty waxing to and from lust.
I breathe for him to kiss me, I shake.
And, coming from behind me, he rests one hand
on my waist as he reaches past
and I scream (explode)
melt
die

but he moves away again, the moment
over. And we must pretend it is only a sandwich
and not desire like a lion, urging me, begging me
to run my hands between shirt and skin,
Taste him,
press my hips against him as I pull him
Close, pour myself into him
and absorb his warmth.

His hands would snatch at me, pull. . .
and on the floor, there in the kitchen
the world would submit to hunger,
heat making me forget tomorrow,
trading my soul for touch.

But he takes his sandwich, and he walks away.
I cannot breathe for the fire in my chest.
If he doesn't touch me --

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Comment by: - 2008-10-06 13:29
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It makes me so much want to know this forbidden one. You write such beautiful poetry, I am jealous with joy. I too love the forbidden fruit and found it cleaver that you put it on the Thanksgiving menu.
Hmmmm Is he relative? Cousin? How delicious!
Svetlana
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe - 2008-09-27 22:10
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Natural, emotional and romantic! Great. Best wishes.
Comment by: - 2008-06-05 17:31
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Strikingly projected into the mind's eye, your poem was great except for the bit about the sandwich. It seemed so mundane. Other than that it was a nice erotic, sexually frustrated poem.
DickGentile Comment by: DickGentile - 2008-02-12 19:19
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Choking chicken?
aprilmayed Comment by: aprilmayed - 2007-11-08 15:53
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This reminded me of a dream I had last night. No, really, it did! The sexual tension in this was really well written. Your metaphors were thought out and not cliche. I enjoyed reading this and I hope to read more!
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