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Onyenuchie
Onyenuchie Ikpeka
Nigeria, Lagos, Ipaja

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Nne

I am half
And you are needed
To make me whole, to help me
And you to accomplish our mission.
It is natural in this land
Of unreal realities.

Living with out you is like
Life with no reality
In this land of low realities.
We are both needed to advance
Till we merge as one
In the highest plane of reality.
I am off the track with out you
Like wise you with out me
Be wise Nne.

There is no love with out you
No life with out you
No advancement, no retreatment
All that seculates with out you
Are phoney.

It's like we are suspended in the middle
Of air with out each other.
No way to the source, no way to the destination
It's a natural journey
For the source and the destination are same.

You might not be able to understand
This consciously, but unconsciously
There are lingering within you, urging you
To look for a place in me to secure yourself.
I am open for you to come on in Nne.
For I have the same feelings,
It is the feelings of unity, spirituality,divinity, Reality, whole and Ultimate feelings that get you back
To the source and destination of God.

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Onyenuchie Comment by: Onyenuchie - 2007-01-31 03:57
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Thanks for appreciating this poem. I only try to express how souls feel, while working off negative karma, that held them tight in this physical world.
autodepressive Comment by: autodepressive - 2006-12-03 07:19
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real good one, i only wish i could understand the deeper meaning of it, then it would really rock... well, great job anyways
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