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Cauterize
Emotional flame meld my frayed nerves
As an iron cheap, plasticky nylon
Reduces to charred, worthless lump.
Conflagration of sadness, scorched by a dream.
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| short not exactly sweet, meld my frayed nerves keeps a softer sound to the work without altering the content |
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| Autodepressive: Not at all blind, 17yo and much more perceptive than many people I've known :)! Loved Pencil-tongue, I've left you a comment. |
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| phew.. so it turned out that im not a blind idiot after all... :) |
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| Autodepressive: there's not so much of a "deep meaning" behind the poem. Its more like a response to deep pain following a recurring dream. |
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| i dont understand the deep meaning behind these lines, but i really like the emotion and flow in it, especially the last line |
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