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Dressed in white bricks she lied
Fallen by some deity's consequence
Warmed by rain as the cold swept
In a haze where sighs didn't rise
To meet the gentle trifling
Waves compelled by all you mist
So windows are eyes to the soul
Eyes covered in pale linen
Blinded by patient stitches
Wandering in effervescence
Seeking your patent presence
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hi, you have an interesting style of words here, "fallen by some deity's consequence" i feel is such a beautiful line and has so much meaning. you have very unique writing, dont change :)
