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| i like this one right to the point |
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| i like this one right to the point |
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| I like the terse nature of this poem. You illustrate well the bleakness of this state of mind. Good write! |
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You seem to have laid out the idea of suicide well. It is almost a mellow-dramatic approach in a way. The way you formatted it, in a very brief and free flow way gave it an overly emotional tint.
Interesting style,
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| That is a sign of true opinions and that gives you power. i really like it. Keep it up. words contain there power until you speak them. and you words are the most powerful of all. thank you for showing me that. |
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