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GrkGrl
Greek Girl
United States, california, Somewhere in

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Acela Express...

~ Acela Express ~

and they turn their noses
but I look through
the glass
beyond the
fog of warm breath...

houses out of sync,
dilapidated and disturbing,
yet oh so right
for what it is...

if you listen close
you can hear the music,
tribal rhythms,
profound bass
with pensive perfections...

and if you're lucky,
you'll understand what this means
somewhere between
Boston and New York...

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MEA da POET Comment by: MEA da POET - 2007-02-17 21:06
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I liked the subtle rythm that the words you used created
Beck Comment by: Beck Online- 2007-02-16 04:47
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I don't know what it's like somewhere between Boston and New York but the poem reminded me of daydreaming in a London cafe while having breakfast after a big night out. You described that feeling perfectly whether intentionally or not.
christskorb11 Comment by: christskorb11 - 2007-02-09 22:32
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we def. need to talk music some more
JohnnySodoff Comment by: JohnnySodoff - 2007-01-08 15:06
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This poem makes me want to go someplace between Boston and New York so I can find out what the hell is up.

Very well written, by the way. I love the last stanza. iMuy Bueno!
GrkGrl Comment by: GrkGrl - 2006-12-04 17:29
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Kero....your comment made me laugh....go east...take the train then call me...we'll talk...gg
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