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cozmikbrown
Peydria Higgins
United States, GA, Brunswick

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The Bird

Take flight, oh my hopes and dreams.
Soar to the sky high above the clouds,
But don't stop.

Reach the Sun and say hello.
The heat burns you,
But don't stop.

The Solar System is vast and cold.
Your desire is strong.
Fly beyond and see,
The things dreams are made of.

Keep soaring, keep moving.
Fly, soar, sail,
A galaxy is waiting for you,
But don't stop.

And when you've gone so far,
You find you can go no more.
Tear apart yourself piece by piece,
And be reborn.

Journey anew as one.
Journey anew as one.

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Afrka Comment by: Afrka - 2007-12-01 09:30
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Nice write. Very vivid and strong sense of imagination.
TheSourMindofZPx Comment by: TheSourMindofZPx - 2007-05-19 06:39
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I agree with sasha very Motivational and beauitful.
erniegirl26 Comment by: erniegirl26 - 2007-03-09 14:26
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I love it. It's about hope, and we all need a bit more of that.
xxsasha1xx Comment by: xxsasha1xx - 2007-03-09 14:05
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This is very inspirational, dare to dream but never stop. i love it.
2runaway Comment by: 2runaway - 2007-01-20 11:01
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Loved it. Poems about dreams. I really liked the metaphor with the bird.
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