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Dorte Rasmussen
Denmark, Copenhagen

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Inner Peace

Silence and no speak
is what we need
to seek
the inner peace

you´ll see
how wonderful peace is
in a world
full of empty speak

we need peace in our lifes
to make us rise up high
and realize
the reason why we´re alive

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Qamar Comment by: Qamar - 2008-07-16 02:32
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AMazing,esp the last part is excellent. I think,you can cover more aspects of the topics by extending it a little. What do you think?
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