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freedomnow
Dorte Rasmussen
Denmark, Copenhagen

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It's Time

"First do no harm" they say
but you go through life hurting people every day
and what do you have to say?
can´t you see
that all you give
is being sent in return
you are the reason for your own hurt
you'll be eating yor own dirt
it's absurd
stop lying to yourself
by blaming everyone else
for the trouble in your life
when only you can make it right


You need to free your spiritual mind
and leave your old life behind
'cause it's time
to open up your eyes
and see the beauti in all
to have no enemy and fight no war
and it's time
to let love show you the way
let it be your guide
and there will be no mistakes
just let your heart speak
and now is the time
when you will find your inner peace

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Qamar Comment by: Qamar - 2008-07-23 23:41
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very very good. It is a nice poem for someone living in resentment. But it is very hard to let your heart speak? what do you say
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