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freedomnow
Dorte Rasmussen
Denmark, Copenhagen

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The Ego

You´re the prison in me
preventing me
from being free
and I need to see
that I'm trapped in your act
and your existence in me
leaves me in misery
your desire
fills me with jealousy
your power
leaves me weak
and your emotions
fills me with greed

I need to see
that all you are
is a robber of my mind
a waste of my time
a creator of lies
who keep me tied
you got me hypnotized
and unless I fight
for my life
I will be trapped inside
until the day I die
as a prisioner for life
while you'll be my guide

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autodepressive Comment by: autodepressive - 2006-12-06 08:02
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i agree with shattereddreamer, put some lyrics to this.
by the way, i really like your message, its very describing
ShatteredDreamer Comment by: ShatteredDreamer - 2006-12-02 10:32
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This would make a beautiful song -- well done this was really great to read!
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