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raynefyre
Jennifer Felton
United States, PA, Dunmore

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The Fool

I hate you
Then I love you
You have my head spinning
All I can do is think of you
And try to understand
How you could do this to me

All those lies
That I was too blind to see through
Others tried to show me
The truth behind your words
But my love wouldn't let me see

I should have listened
But now it's too late
I've let you into my heart
Now there's no letting you out

When I think about
All our times together
It makes me cry
Remembering your touch
Remembering your words
That I was fool enough to believe
To think I knew the truth
But tried to believe you were true

You really played me for the fool
What were you thinking
If you even were at all
What did you want from me
I hope you were satisfied
Because I won't be the fool
For you anymore

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raynefyre Comment by: raynefyre - 2006-12-05 05:59
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Thanks yeah he didn't, but it was still hard, and it still hurt. Still does a lil even after 3 years :/
GrkGrl Comment by: GrkGrl - 2006-12-04 18:15
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that bastid didn't deserve you anyway!!!
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