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raynefyre
Jennifer Felton
United States, PA, Dunmore

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Infatuation

I really thought this was it
Thought this time was different
But your silence speaks louder than words
Don't know what to do
To make it like it was

What's with this infatuation
Why cant it be love
You're everything I want
And everything I need
But you turn your back
Like you just don't care

And now that I need you the most
Its like your not there
I just don't know
How to go on without you by my side
What can I do
To get you here with me

What's with this infatuation
Why can't it be love
You're everything I want
And everything I need
But you turn your back
Like you just don't care

And you say
That its just not our time
And I can't breathe
How can this be over
When its just begun
I listen to your silence
Listen to words
And I just can't understand
Why is all this happening

What's with this infatuation
Why can't it be love
You're everything I want
And everything I need
But you turn your back
Like you just don't care

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Comment by: - 2006-12-05 07:12
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i love how you keep repeating the same line. great way to reinforce your theme...nice
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