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raynefyre
Jennifer Felton
United States, PA, Dunmore

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I Need To Know

Everything about me has no innocence
I have to dig in my soul
To find a deeper hole
My life has changed
And I don't know what's goin' on
I need some answers
Or I'll go insane

Everyone around me knows
But yet I'm in the dark
Let the secrets
Of my past be known
Cause I really need to know

You look so familiar
But yet you've changed
I think I know you
Yet you're a stranger to me
When I close my eyes
You're what I'm dreaming of
Why won't you leave my mind?

Everyone around me knows
But yet I'm in the dark
Let the sectrets
Of my past be known
Cause I really need to know

I don't know what's going on
All around I see people from my past
Yet the images in my head don't last
They try to tell me things
Silent words I don't understand
But yet I hear their terror
And a silent warning
Of things I need to know

Everyone around me knows
But yet I'm in the dark
Let the secrets
Of my past be known
Because I really need to know

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raynefyre Comment by: raynefyre - 2006-12-05 11:36
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Aw. Thanks tadk! :) I'm glad that you like it. I have **a lot** more where that came from. Just need to find the time to put them from my notebook onto the computer. Also need to upgrade if I plan on putting them all up, because I probably have around 100! lol.

And not to mention the stories I started :)
Comment by: - 2006-12-05 07:13
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this poem I like a lot. It is worthy of more attention
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