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raynefyre
Jennifer Felton
United States, PA, Dunmore

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Buried In Victims

I thought about that day
Thought about all those times
This broken heart been through so much
Didn't see past your surface
Can't count the broken hearts
All those left in a pile

I'm buried in victims
Victims of love
Those that have given up
Forget what it was
Buried in victims
Of a love left behind

All those lies told
Just to see what you could get
Didn't even think of those
Whose hearts you collect
Without a thought
I see the destuction that you left

I'm buried in victims
Victims of love
Those that have given up
Forget what it was
Buried in victims
Of a love left behind

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GrkGrl Comment by: GrkGrl - 2006-12-13 19:25
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this reads like a song....it would make for some powerful lyric
Kerosene Comment by: Kerosene - 2006-12-04 08:02
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I liked this one. I would drop the last stanza though.
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