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raynefyre
Jennifer Felton
United States, PA, Dunmore

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Understand

I don't know what to do
Don't know what to say
It's all so confusing
How we ended up this way
I never understood
How you could be so cruel

Like all those kids
That never had a chance
Had to put up with people like you
That never understood them
Never even tried
I cant understand those
That didn't even wanna try

What makes you think you're so much better?
What makes you think you're so cool?
I just don't understand
What gives you the right to judge me
You were supposed to undertand
And be there for me
I wanna know what went wrong
I don't understand how you can act this way

Like all those kids
That never had a chance
Had to put up with people like you
That never understood them
Never even tried
I cant understnad those
That didn't even wanna try

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raynefyre Comment by: raynefyre - 2006-12-04 08:21
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Thanks Mitra. A lot of the stuff I write is more song, hence the repetition of a stanza.

Thanks I am glad that you like it!
mitra Comment by: mitra - 2006-12-04 08:10
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The words sound simple enough but the emotion is strong. The repetition of a whole stanza is new to me however I think it is used appropriately here. Nice write.
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