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Comment by: Cherley - 2006-12-28 15:29
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| Yes, you captured the young man with the mirror part. LOL. It's so hard to let go. |
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Comment by: Jamilah - 2006-12-05 21:30
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I love your expressiveness of this poem. "The mirror won he won't." You say so much with so few words in a work which touches the surface and also goes far beyond. And as the mother of grown boys, I know exactly what you mean.
Excellent work. |
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Wow. W-O-W.
I feel like I was actually there, the child on the ferry. My father would be so excited to see a poem like this. I'm sure he felt that way when I left to live with my mother. So this poem is a little close to home. Good job! |
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Great piece, I feel like a father just reading it.
I really like the fourth stanza about the coat and the mirror. Something I probably would've done a couple years ago. Too cool for school and all. Anyways, this reads great. YES! |
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