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jelonbelon
Huda Izam
Malaysia, Negeri Sembilan, Sungai Gadut

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Of whipping and being a dominatrix

Everything here might or might not happen... depending on how wild your imagination is...

As the usual rendesvous', they all started with the Internet Relay Chat Service. Accepting invites to various rooms, like playing a game of hide and seek. Peek-a-boo, yoohoo... here I am, talk to me. Feathered in absurdly fashioned nicknames, vying for attention... pick me, pick me... talk to me... Shamelessly flaunting things that you may not have... oh of course... My breasts are mountains, come play within these valleys... or... Of course I could tie you up... maybe... No, I'm free of STD's.

Then comes the one savior... the one who stands out from the rest... and catching your eye... then... Let's meet, where are you... Of course, any pictures?... The usual a/s/l questions... Don't you ever get tired of it? Of course you say, but there is the fun of it all... The one who breaks all moulds, the one who doesn't always start their questions with Hey baby, let's shag... not... I love vaginas... never... Who are you.... Never one of these lame people.

Then you find yourself in a car, on a motorcycle, or walking. Meeting strangers, comforting your fears with "a stranger's just a friend you haven't met". Out for sex, camouflaged by dinners, books or trips to the mall... Comfortable without the usual mask you wear for society, but with a mask of impurity. Basking in the glory of not being caught... Laughing away the day... or night... Anticipation of a new adventure soon to come... Between sheets and sins...

Finding yourself being tied up... or tying someone up. Between being whipped or the one whipping. Every slashing sound like a catalyst, rushing between your erythrocytes. Shivering with every little pain inflicted, getting more and more excited with every moan. Every words of pain soothes your own wounds inside, calms your own insecurities... You slowly accepting that you are someone... Bigger, smaller... depending on who wears the collar.

Finally, letting that rush of pleasure passing through your groins. Wanting it to happen again and again... Shamelessly being ashamed, taunting and taunted... Gaining your self worth by losing respect... Licking every drop of your humility. Wasn't that fun? Walking out of the cramped hotel space, bruised but alive. Knowing that what happened was the deepest kind of trust, the loveliest kind of affection ... and finding yourself in front of the blue screen yet again... another adventure unravelling.

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DriftwoodWriter Comment by: DriftwoodWriter - 2007-04-04 10:11
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Some people have... a better imagination for love, and lust, than others. Trust is something that is so easily spent these days, but I think the word trust itself is overused, and misunderstood. Following a stranger into a hotel room for some sort of BDSM adventure is a little less trust, and a little more madness, or plain stupidity. Bondage, from what I understand in terms of rules of engagement, is supposed to be as much about trust as it is about pleasure. A person who wanders blindly into a situation like that with such trust, cannot be trusted theirselves. There is an instability, or a disorder that makes them as equal a potentially deadly person as the other.

I do enjoy your narrarative here though; I like your use of descriptors, and comparitives. My personal perspective on trust has little impact on my decision to like or dislike a project; I was merely offering some reflection. I look forward to reading more work by you, and hope that you put some new work up soon!

Thank you for sharing with us,

J. Edward Nolan
Comment by: - 2007-02-09 21:15
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Ooo thats scary. I played the chat room game a few times but never met anyone in real life. My sister however married her online man and they've been together for 3 years now...have a son. Hes a great person. I guess who you meet and what you do all goes along with the game you planned on playing when you opened the chat screen. Good write, Jenn
Comment by: - 2006-12-19 01:52
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jeez louise!

some things are just too honest!

kudos, woman
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