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An open mind
An open mind
It's a calm day!
Is everyone a vessel of 'negative truths' until pointed in the right direction?
Or does it not matter?
Is it just an unseen human infection?
What is this game of unseen knowledge?
Will anyone ever find it?
To know of a knowledge that even the knowledgeable fear to acknowledge!
Could this reality just be the first step to knowing all knowledge?
Or just a sad existence of a species left to learn this knowledge in a false hope that
the species would learn the knowledge to exist outside of our physical self's?
In that case:
Is our existence simply to infect and brutally destroy a helpless planet?
So are we a tool? And are we utterly oblivious to it?
Or just a rare and fascinating, fragile, brutal, calculating and strange accident?
Or just a pointless means to a pointless end?
Is death just a gateway to another existence?
An existence free from physical rules to roam and explore!
Is life just a training, initiation test?
Or once we go though this gateway at the end, could it just be nothingness?
An existence but also to not exist!
An existence to be nothing!
Because nothingness has to be something?
Is nothingness just another species?
Does 'nothingness' ever become extinct?
What would exist beyond 'nothing'?
Would it be another that 'nothing' that 'nothing' ever had the knowledge to know
that this other 'nothing' could ever exist?
Does 'nothing' have the knowledge that we seek?
Could it be then, to truly ever know the knowledge that 'nothing' knows one must
become the 'nothing' to become the knowledge that 'nothing knows!
Maybe that is the only way to truly know the knowledge?!
Could a physical being ever become the knowledge by exerting his/her will?
I suppose no-one will ever know this knowledge until the gateway is opened!
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| Interesting, I like how you link yet branch out one line to the next. Very nice! |
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| Cheers man, glad you liked it. Na i didnt get confused, it just sort of rolled into place. Might have some more like that too. Looking forward to reading some of yours!!!! |
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| wicked man!!random an crazy the way i like it!!makes ya think too!!did u not get confused wen u were writing it?Keep it up man! |
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