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raynefyre
Jennifer Felton
United States, PA, Dunmore

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Fairy Tales

I wanna take you to a place
Where all your dreams come true
I want to go with you there
It's a place where we can hide
All our troubles disappear
Our happiness returns
And you whisper in my ear
The words I wanna hear

This place of mine
Where we can hide
From all our fears
Happiness unfolds
Take us from our tears
Return joy to our life
In this place were we belong
A place of lullabies

Fairy tales become real
Cinderella and Ariel
Our love will keep us warm and shine
To help us through the nights
We can make this place real
We can have peace of minds
All you have to do my love
Is look into my eyes

This place of mine
Were we can hide
From all our fears
Happiness unfolds
Take us from our tears
Return joy to our life
In this place where we belong
A place of lullabies

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raynefyre Comment by: raynefyre - 2006-12-06 19:43
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I see what you mean Whisper. It does a little. Funny thing is I love them and I wrote it a long time before I ever heard them :)
whisper2me73 Comment by: whisper2me73 - 2006-12-06 11:41
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This reminds me of the lyrics to an Evanescence song. It's beautiful.
raynefyre Comment by: raynefyre - 2006-12-06 06:03
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Yeah the formatting got messed up on the ones I posted last night for some reason... :/ Fixing them now :)
Comment by: - 2006-12-06 05:56
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neat...unlike the other one, this one i would like in more poetry format...otherwise I really like it
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