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raynefyre
Jennifer Felton
United States, PA, Dunmore

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Without You

I don't know how to live my life without you
Without you my world would come tumbling down
Living without you isn't worth living at all
I'd rather die than be alone
Because I would be
Without you here
If you could read my mind
I'd tell you every moment how I felt
You would see my love growing
Day by day

I just can't help but think about you
We can't change the past
We can't change what used to be
Our love is a shattered memory of the past
My life is nothing without you

My life ought to be over
Because I can't live without you
Since the day you left me
i cried myself to sleep
I hate those days
I don't get to hear you say you love me
I don't know how to live my life without you
loving without you just doesn't seem right
I feel like I'd die if I don't have you
That's life without you

I just can't help but think about you
We can't change the past
We can't change what used to be
Our love is a shattered memory of the past
My life is nothing without you

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chibearsfan2006 Comment by: chibearsfan2006 - 2007-02-25 14:16
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very good piece!
raynefyre Comment by: raynefyre - 2006-12-07 19:56
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Yeah well, unfortunately most of my stuff is sad and angsty. My best inpirations are breakups, an asshole I used to be with, and my dad's death.

Very few happy events in my life inspire me to write. lol
simowierdo Comment by: simowierdo - 2006-12-07 13:29
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mmhmm...this is nice...i agree with Kerosene...it's a little too sad for me :D but that's just me...
PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2006-12-07 11:22
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Though this is a little raw around the edges I think your emotion shines through. All of our work could use a little polishing (mine more than others :)**
raynefyre Comment by: raynefyre - 2006-12-07 06:20
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Thanks John, it was a typo! lol. All fixed.

Thanks guys for your input. I'll see what I can do polish it. It's a few years old but I threw it in last night 'as is' lol
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