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sabihah
sabihah docrat
South Africa, kzn pongola

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While you were sleeping...

Your back was slightly turned,
I kissed your cheek,
could see the tears behind your brown wise eyes building solidly
yet you turned away, not,
and closed your eyes.

While you were sleeping I danced within your dreams,
there I was all you wanted me to be.
Yet you know the truth,
too blind to see,
too weak to feel,
too alive to bleed.

While you were sleeping
I toured the world,
touched a ray of light,
danced naked beneath the moonlight,
carressed fond dreams
I found him and let him go.

While you were sleeping
the world was mine alone to own
I searched for all you were afraid I would find
and there it seeked and grasped me
willingly i surrenderd
to your deepest fears.

While you were sleeping
they fell at my feet
every contour of my heart belonged to them.
Naked I stood before the light
and they still smile
illuminating the darkness behind.

While you were sleeping
I desired perfection
dew on my pillow
I awake and feel that long gone warmth.

While you were sleeping I danced with death,
I found the power to live
I broke your brave heart and soul
and faced your fears.

But while you were sleeping, Daddy
I kissed your soul
I love with every lie I with-hold...

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deathbyacid Comment by: deathbyacid - 2006-12-23 01:03
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hmm, brown eyes screaming, while you were wondering!
logicustracticus Comment by: logicustracticus - 2006-12-15 10:16
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Yes prefer this to just a fantasy, prob because it has clear verses and other doesn't even if both are related
sabihah Comment by: sabihah - 2006-12-07 06:02
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:) thanx...a correction though the last line should be i love you with every lie i with-hold
athousandmiles Comment by: athousandmiles - 2006-12-07 05:58
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This is by far my favourite of what you've done. The imagery is wonderful.
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