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Nana
Nathalie "Nana" Reyes
United States, ny, Baldwin

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Unhallowed

But the sun never set on the horizon
And the moon was barely a shadow;
There was no wind, the air was thick
The streets and paths were narrow.

And yet the town went about
Its everyday bustle-
The merchants, the buyers-
The everyday hustle.

Children ran naked here and there
With evil wickedness on their smiles.
They grinned at the living, at the dead
Their laughter was heard from miles.

The old ones just sat there-
Raving and ranting,
Young adults hid in their lust-
Puffing and panting.

And suddenly there was a voice,
It was heard by every corner,
And like powerful thunder it said,
'Take the Guiltless to the burner!'

The selling stopped,
The buying ceased,
They all started searching
Like hungry beasts.


They searched every bend, every hole.
It was all decided: the lot was thrown.
From among the impish, among all fiends
Was found a perfect soul- a pure one alone.

A maiden she was-
A transparent gem,
Yet, from all the evil ones
She was condemned.

And she was taken to the burner
Without refusal, without a stir.
And all that was ever left of her
Was a simple, silent bloody slur.

The town went back to its everyday routine
Sitting and waiting till the voice was heard again,
Selling and buying, killing and dying
Probing and searching for the Pure One until then.

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kpguevarra Comment by: kpguevarra - 2008-04-09 19:11
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nice imagery, nice rhythm, successful in conveying the meaning, poignant enough to get me reading til the end. this is very nice. thanks for this read! :)
MEA da POET Comment by: MEA da POET - 2007-02-13 12:16
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The words you chose for this piece transplanted me into the place you speak of. I could hear the little naked children running by and I saw the sun and felt the thickness in the air. This was beautiful!
Sankylady20 Comment by: Sankylady20 - 2007-02-02 21:18
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Very beautiful, I love the way you put your words , I liked it alot ~ Sarah
lyrically yours Comment by: lyrically yours - 2007-01-18 06:52
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Wonderful imagery with great flow, I enjoyed. You took us to another world, well-written.
jennifersiobhan Comment by: jennifersiobhan - 2007-01-02 23:41
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This is wonderfully mysterious. Easy to read and well-written.
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