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Comment by: corrina - 2008-10-30 14:09
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| So I have to ask...how does the man listen to a dog sit and stare? heh....maybe I just read it out of context. When he closes his eyes to a sky of nothingness, isn't his blindness the catalist to nothingness? |
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| Great description of an old man's solitude. Nice imagery, the 2nd line is also my favorite, but I also enjoyed the part you write about the others who surround him. Good work |
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Comment by: Nana - 2006-12-13 07:21
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Absolutely beautiful. Loved how you described everything so perfectly and created an almost live image in the reader's mind.
"...like a kamikaze storm of solitude.." My favorite line.
Thanks for another great read! ;) |
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| poof...well to bad ey...sorry the old man was feeling a tid bit on the lonly side...well guess it was his time than ey |
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Comment by: Jewels Online- 2006-12-09 11:56
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| I love the imagery, the words paint not a landscape and a soundscape for the reader. The last line is my favourite, intriguing too. |
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