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| I am not worried about the typos...to understand a person's creativity we have to put aside their flaws...I think you nailed it with this piece...So many times, we are so wrapped up in our own lives/world, we forget there are things going on beyond our own walls...their are spiritual happenings our mind and eyes can't comprehend or see...there are others wishing for the same things in a different time zone...and we all fell like our world stays the same.... |
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| I love it (except the grammer) it has a nice flow and an amazing meaning of stepping outside to see what's reality and what's really going on. |
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| First, 'dieing' should be 'dying'. Second, this isn't a bad effort. It has a good rhythm and flows well. I got a sense of stepping outside to see how things really are when I read this. Good stuff, Fernando. |
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Comment by: Inferno - 2007-06-04 10:48
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| Thanks for the comments on this one. I don't think I really got across what I was trying to say on this one, but I think that something comes across. Something slips through. thank you. |
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I can't even quite put my finger, on why I am so terribly drawn to this piece. I may have to read it several times more to fully comprehend my complete enthrallment with it.
If your other writing is anything like this, I am sure to be an unwavering fan. |
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