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cinders
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untitled for my super-ex

I sleep behind him now, in reverse-spoon
so my hair won't get in his mouth
press my belly into
the small of his back
roll my hips up against his behind
wrap my top leg around his leg
my hand is on his side
fingers resting in curves between ribs
slowly I let them slip forward
and glide my hand across his chest.
He is always warm to the touch
soft and smooth, hairless like a baby
I trace the lines of his muscles
(strength relaxed beneath my touch)
my thumb runs across a tiny inverted nipple
perfect size for catching a
raindrop, or a tear.
I smell his skin
kiss his shoulder
rest my chin at the
nape of his neck
and kiss lightly behind his earlobe.
His hand finds mine in the dark
laces our fingers together
and holds it to his heart,
two lost pieces
from separate jigsaw puzzles
that magically interlock.

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PBlakey Comment by: PBlakey - 2006-04-26 07:58
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you put me right back in my bed warm and sleepy with this one! great stuff, love it.
oddfruit Comment by: oddfruit - 2006-04-20 14:07
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The comfort of being in a partners arms comes across so intensely here. Beautifully written
inviscera Comment by: inviscera - 2006-04-13 08:12
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Beautifully put. You totally capture the kind of quiet, intimate moments that make good relationships great. Interesting that the poem is dedicated to an 'ex'. This love was clearly the real deal, even if it didn't last forever.
Comment by: - 2006-04-13 00:07
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wow. great poem. i especially love the last three lines...so...poetic, for lack of a better word. very relatable poem for me. great write!
redbirdjazzz Comment by: redbirdjazzz - 2006-04-12 14:27
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Very beautiful imagery. The last three lines are great.
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