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Brindle
Brindle
Hungary, Budapest

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Secret

I study your face
In my surreptitious ways,
Heart cradling your name.

It's been a long time.
Your being's traced into mine
Like day into night.

Now don't get me wrong-
Though like night and day, we belong,
Only dusk and dawn

Will ever be ours.
Lesser and greater powers'll
Steal til their term sours,

Their days blind and dazed.
In my surreptitious ways
I study your face.

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Brindle Comment by: Brindle - 2007-05-17 11:31
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Thank you for your generous words.
Scribe Comment by: Scribe Online- 2007-04-15 09:50
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"Though like night and day, we belong,
Only dusk and dawn"

Only when the light is dim do we see more clearly? I like that notion, if my interpretation is correct, that is.
isismarie Comment by: isismarie - 2006-12-11 17:23
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I like how this poem fits the words into an easy going flow. Its really nice.
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