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kangeloux
Jorge Brown
United States, FL, Jacksonville

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Veleidoso amor (In collaboration with my friend Gustavo Ramos)

Llega tu flecha certera
sustrayendo presentes estratos
desnudandome de años
volcando savia de cuenta nueva
en aquellos dias nublados
de suave opresión y misterio

En tus ojos, Que no endurecen a pesar del tiempo, Se adivina una ilusión y una esperanza, ¿Será el amor irrepetible? �nico en cada ser Y en cada encuentro, ¿será posible que en cada dulce mirar? Hay un amor diferente, una aventura que no se vivió, ¿Pero que no muere?

Veleidoso es el amor como le somos nosotros'¦..

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kangeloux Comment by: kangeloux - 2007-01-08 13:44
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Este es un poema viejito... Yo creo que me voy a volver monje ;)
almagemelas Comment by: almagemelas - 2007-01-08 07:19
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que lindo Jorge, se ve que todavia hay esperanza en tu mente de un gran amor, espero que lo encuntres ese amor..
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