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youngace17
Nick Clayborne
United States, Illinois, Gurnee

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Ballad to Cassidy

Love is an unbelievable feeling
And my love will never die
Cassi I truly love you
And I hope you know why
You're truly a great girl
With such a great heart
I'm glad I found a woman
Who'se also freakin smart
I can't wait to see you
Even if it takes a thousand years
I hope it doesn't take that long
Or I'll cry a thousand tears
My sweet Cassi, I love you
And this you know is true
I really can't wait
Until the day I get to see you!

-I love you Cassidy!

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youngace17 Comment by: youngace17 - 2007-01-03 01:41
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Heh, actually, the person I wrote to is my dear and loving girlfriend. I love her so much. I wrote her this poem because I was so happy to be with her that day. I wrote this poem in calligraphy and decorated it, then sent it off to her, before actually giving her the online verson.
Cmtheonly Comment by: Cmtheonly - 2006-12-30 01:21
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AWWWW! How cute! Is this like a secret poem about an girl or does she know these feelings? Well, anyway, good poem!
naoba Comment by: naoba - 2006-12-22 13:12
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=)
Sugar coated, but who cares? It's straight from the heart, right? and belive me, that's the only thing that counts.
keep writting.
MaggieMay Comment by: MaggieMay Online- 2006-12-13 13:50
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this is a very sweet piece. Well formatted and delivered, and very sugary! almost cute! <3

she must be a special girl... at the very least she's a lucky to have such a cute tribute. ;)

nice write,
MM
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