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Gregory
Gregory Dancer
United Kingdom, Oxfordshire, Banbury

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Polite shadow?

I keep steping on my shadow.
But it never seems to complain.

And when I step on my shadow;
I think,does it feel any pain?

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BrindleyHD Comment by: BrindleyHD - 2006-12-22 02:41
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You need a pee. It will help, believe me!
poety55 Comment by: poety55 - 2006-12-17 00:35
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Hah! I enjoyed reading this. I love poems that kind of snap shut on your fingers! Great read!
yellowjacket Comment by: yellowjacket - 2006-12-14 16:34
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What? Every time?

Thought I'd best comment on one of your poems since I've read and enjoyed every one of them.
Keep it up. especially these Hemmingway classics, I always have time to read these ones.
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