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Tev Kaber
United States, MA, Worcester

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I want a girl

I want a girl
who will lie beside me
in a field of green
and listen to the hum of nature
around us

I want a girl
who is full of questions
her spark
glowing brightly
lighting the world

I want a girl
who calls my bluff
makes me defend my ideas
forces me to take a stand
drags me out onto the dance floor

I want a girl
I can wrap my arms around
kiss deeply
and do things to
that make her toes curl

I want a girl
who will stand next to me
arms outstretched
as we ride the wind
of a crisp fall day

I want a girl
I just
want
a girl
who
wants
me
back

Is that so much to ask?

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Boonrassi Comment by: Boonrassi - 2007-07-27 15:23
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I want a girl
who will lie beside me
in a field of green
and listen to the hum of nature
around us
mootiy Comment by: mootiy - 2007-05-30 10:05
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This is a great piece, very well written, i enjlyed the read very much..thanks
PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2007-01-28 18:32
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Turn this around and this could have been written by me.

This was just beautiful...there has to be a catch-lol

Going on bookshelf to remind me there are guys like you out there.

Excellent write.**
sunshine Comment by: sunshine - 2007-01-26 16:25
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This is my new favorite love poem, I really like how honest and straight forward your words are. It's really and beautiful and sweet poem, great job.
poety55 Comment by: poety55 - 2006-12-17 00:00
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This is very sweet. And no, it's not too much to ask. Not at all. Thanks for a great read! :-)
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