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Inferno
Fernando Sillas
United States

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Paragraph 175

Is 50 years too late?
He already threw the pictures away
more than once.
He's already sworn never to shake
hands with the enemy again
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They all remember the golden age
before the second war.
The world was as romantic as the music played.
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The golden age when boys
weren't boys and girls weren't girls
but we were all people.
Bodies and souls
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They let the dogs eat him.
My botched rescue attempt.
My broken heart is the heart of the world.
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In sept. I'll be 93.

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Kerosene Comment by: Kerosene - 2007-01-11 18:48
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Hmm..dont really know what to make of this. Is it a story? A poem?

One suggestion:

The first line should have a question mark.

john
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