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jkaber
Judy K
United States, ME, Belfast

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A father eating

Saturday mornings broke apart
the pattern of our days.
The steam from your coffee
split around your face, stumbled
rising, vanished in a slap of sunlight.
The paper rattled hard against
the flannel cuff of your robe,
rubbed against maroon fabric,
wrestled past the dark hairs
on your extended wrist
as you turned each page. News
meant murder, thieving politicians,
factories closed, cars driven
off the road, not the dimpled
chatterings of some small
nine year old. The robe lay
cinched tight around your waist,
barely parted at your knees.
Your leather slippers held
a hard worn shine.
Not a crumb fell.
I stayed in bed and pulled
the covers up and dreamed
my waking dreams.

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wildcalm Comment by: wildcalm - 2006-12-27 08:57
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That was great - it reads really smoothly. Took a little time to get the image of -
'The steam from your coffee
split around your face..'
(I thought for a moment should that be 'spilt'? and if so, where is this gonna go? lol)
digs Comment by: digs Online- 2006-12-19 06:08
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I really enjoyed this wistful evocation.
Jamilah Comment by: Jamilah - 2006-12-18 21:34
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Thank you for this. It brings back memories of mornings with my father. I especially love "News/meant murder, thieving politicians,/factories closed, cars driven/off the road, not the dimpled/ chatterings of some small/nine year old." My father complained to my mother because I tried to hold conversations with him in the morning.

Great write, as usual.
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