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Branwen
Jessica Hunter
United Kingdom, Gloucester

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Pretty

Hold Still
And I promise this won't hurt
One
Bit

Don't move
I know that I can make you
Feel
Better

Sit down
I want to tell you how much
I
Hate

And spew these disgusting words
Out of such a pretty little mouth
Pretty little girl
Pretty shoes
Pretty hair
Pretty face
She's pretty naïve, don't you think?
She's pretty fucked up
Is what I say
Don't look at her
Don't talk to her
Don't say a
Single
Damn
Word
That pretty little thing isn't worth your time

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darkjaden77 Comment by: darkjaden77 - 2008-06-29 19:57
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Very harsh, took me by surprise very good.
Scribe Comment by: Scribe - 2007-05-04 02:30
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Harsh. Bitter. Genuine. I liked its cadence. The words stab you.
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