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To...
I remember, not often,
sat opposite some young poet
sweating his hyperbole over the starving audience
in a New England hole
how you said I spoke like Goethe
and listened like Beethoven,
strung out on tunes of dirge
you said I sat like Buddha
and stood like Liszt,
laying in bare skid row dampness
you said I made love like the sun
and breathed like a Ginsberg flame
and all I did was stare
all I did was lie awake
when I might have slept like
moonrays in a polar snowstorm
all I did was count the stars
n stroll pocket handed down
midnight shuffle streets
all I did was know you were there
waiting to dance to the locust orchestra.
I feel like the fool
I look like the bum
and even as the ink is wet
I feel like the only survivor.
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| That is well done. I am wowed. |
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| What beautiful poetry. Truly poetry in motion. |
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that is so full of life! had me laughing at the name dropping, kind of like 'the dozens' in reverse.
'all i did was stare, all i did was lie awake' Yeah! love that, might be me but it makes feel like some serious projection was going on. It adds a funny 'what are you crazy?' touch. I know that's not how it's intended because of the next lines, but before i got to the next lines- I was moved by and laughing at those 2 lines. |
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Comment by: Valerie - 2006-01-07 23:42
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| What can I say about this composition of verse that hasn't already been said. You have the gift of poetic thought and creation, along with an eloquence of expression. You are a prince. |
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Comment by: - 2005-12-21 16:37
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I really enjoyed this, the imagery is amazing.
Love your work! |
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