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meatloaf
meat loaf
Philippines, cavite, cavite

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Broken Hinge

BROKEN HINGE

A cross between a dog and a rat.
A cat maybe.
Something in between I say,
that fits the missing link.

Somewhere in the middle,
between good and evil'¦
Purgatory they lies,
humanity are their ties.

Something in between.
Hard to accept'¦
Hard to find'¦
Bizarre and peculiarly weird..
Only like us can practice it's wield.

'¦Something in between'¦
...Something in between
Why some?
Because it's a mix?
Is it something needed to be fixed???

Something in between'¦
It is hard.
Utter cuss words to me...
but still...
let it be...
let me be me...

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frumpalump Comment by: frumpalump - 2007-04-28 12:15
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woa. that was certainly interesting, but i liked it.
one quick thought tho.. 'Purgatory they lies' didn't make as much sense to me as the rest of the piece did. just thought i'd tell you. nice job
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