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antonanon
Anthony Dunkley
India, Goa, Margao

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the fisherman

There's a dog
Sitting on the front
Of a boat.
There's a man rowing,
Silently.
When his oars
Touch the water
There is no splash,
So many are the
Years of practice
To perfect his stroke.
The years
Of out at dawn
And back at dusk
With the day's haul
Lying between
Him and his dog,
Silently.

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holy smoke Comment by: holy smoke - 2007-04-03 15:15
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Great poem. I just love the part of his oars making no splashes in the water because of his practice. This poem flows very well also.
Anne Comment by: Anne - 2007-03-10 02:08
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Good work. Shows a nice picture of what the man is doing and his routine . Like it
Comment by: - 2007-03-03 22:28
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People always falling into routine!...eh!?


good write bro ;P
Comment by: - 2007-02-13 15:05
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this is beautiful. paints a nice picture. nothing i would change. thanks for the read.
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