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thewordzwithin
Darnell Brown
United States, De, Claymont

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SpeechlessI stand utterly speechlessGasping for airBecause her beauty has all but taken it awayOne glance Has put me in a perpetual tranceOf sheer ecstasy I can feel her presence next to meIf she only knew how much of an impact she's had on my life alreadyMy heart is racing and I can't keep my hands steadyI look at her and thank God he put her in my lifeBecause just seeing her makes everything seem rightBut I wonder what she thinks of meI just hope she falls in love with me instantly I hope I make everyone of her dreams come trueMy knees are shaking and my face is turning blueMy eyes are filled with tearsAnd my heart is filled with loveBecause what I'm holding in my handsIs my beautiful baby girl sent from above

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