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agnieszka
Agnieszka Michalak
Australia, WA, Perth

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Class of Disrespect

They laugh in the face of death
For them,
such a mere joke
Mundane, to smile and scoff without regard
For those weeping'¦
and weeping'¦
Oh, how they weep in the wake of death
lost, wandering in loneliness
and shedding tears of pain
for a friend; a recent pass away
a student mourns for their friend
a 21 year old, kind hearted boy,
who died in a freak accident,
with a bike, a car, and a kerb.
a friend, a son, a brother, an uncle'¦
his life is gone, lost;
for now

the student also weeps,
at the passing of a mentor
a tutor, and a dear friend
who was lead to death's door,
by cancer's grim hands.

The lives lost, are gone.
For now,
but not for ever.
I have hope-
I grieve like everyone else,
but I have hope;
unlike everyone else.

I will see them again.

For now, the students
they can laugh all they want'¦
After all,
ignorance is bliss!

But so, too, is knowledge.


Piotr'¦
Madame Dixon'¦

You will be missed

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fratjoe18 Comment by: fratjoe18 - 2008-02-22 16:21
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Im sorry for what happened, I know you have a rare talent, I think everyone has a opinion on being a critic, expressing your feelings on this subject is never ending. great poem
CowgirlSerenity Comment by: CowgirlSerenity - 2008-01-07 19:11
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I am sorry for you loss but I think you did a wonderfull job any words that you can express are words to help you get through your time of tragedy... Sometimes it helps just to write your pain on paper, although your pain was so terrible....
GHOSTER Comment by: GHOSTER - 2007-11-16 13:12
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Very interesting read my friend.I like the ray of hope you put in the poem.Yes there is a lot to handle in this poem but it kind of parallels life,because life has a lot to handle at times.
Lady spead stick Comment by: Lady spead stick - 2007-01-22 12:57
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very dramatic write, i liked it
agnieszka Comment by: agnieszka - 2007-01-05 03:50
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i beleive in the resurrection hope, that's what I was referring to... i wrote this poem after my friend was really kileld in that bike accident, and my French teacher dies from cancer..
at times i feel i wasn't able to express enough in the poem, yet i was told that i was trying to express TOO much. Too much for people to handle...
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