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Do you love me for real?
Do you love me for real?
That's the question I hear'¦
I have no ideas what to say in reply,
But the day you're not with me
All my thoughts are so mirthless,
I feel pain in my heart, and it cries.
Every time you're smiling
I feel so happy, darling,
I am so complete and can fly.
No words, no expressions
Can explain all my passion
Which is growing deeply inside.
If you still need the answer,
Just keep silent and glance at
Those lines I have written above.
Let your heart think about,
And one day you'll find out,
If I love you for real, My Love'¦
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Comment by: - 2005-11-26 06:44
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This poem seems to be providing written proof of love. As such, I enjoyed the gentle irony, especially:
'just keep silent and glance at
Those lines I have written above.'
as though you are writing an essay to prove a simple hypothesis. Othere than that, you sustained the strict rhyme and meter which enhanced the ironic feel, at least for this reader.
Thanks for sharing.
xx Sian |
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