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staceyrlouiso
Stacey Louiso
United States, FL, Naples

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When he tempted me

He must have been reading my mind when he tempted me with making love in the rain.

For at that exact moment, lying there entangled in him, I was thinking that very same thing.
How did he do that'knowing me so well?
I only know what he wants me to; leaving me dazed and bewildered.
We are a perfect match, in my heart. Yet, my mind knows better.
Now, my heart sinks deep into my chest when I think of how he encapsulated me with all of those beautiful words.

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