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| This strikes deep. |
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Comment by: menoh - 2008-07-29 21:54
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| definitely powerful, to transfer your identity and feelings into that of a plastic bottle. the ending is the best...i relate to that on so many levels...overall a good piece, sticking to no conformity and going outside the box.. |
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| Pretty original method of addressing issues of emptiness and exhaustion. I liked the image of stomping on the bottle to expel those feelings. Powerful picture there. |
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stunning! very bold
- you loved
i loved
you smiled
i smiled
you walked away
i walked away
why did we expect too much?
you just fucking walked way
maybe,
you say "you just fucking walk away"
sandesh |
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| How familiar I am with that plastic feeling! Quite an original comparison. Polish this up a bit and it works beautifully, Christina! |
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