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Amanda Holt
United States, Kentucky

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Dangerous Agnosticism

Blurred by tears, the harvest
moon speared itself on the Baptist
steeple and--

I'll be damned--

red engulfed the sanctuary.

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clhayden Comment by: clhayden - 2007-12-07 03:25
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Amanda, have read a few of your pieces. Your imagery is vivid and stark. Beautiful work for one so young. Keep it up. You have talent.
jyngrehl Comment by: jyngrehl - 2007-11-08 12:43
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Wow, I think I will have to read more of your writing so I can get a better feel of your style. This type of writing is a little out of my normal reading. But the words and the flow, I really enjoyed!
Red Pulp Comment by: Red Pulp - 2007-10-22 18:37
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Twenty words into the heart of Red Pulp Underground. Excellent.
Comment by: - 2007-04-04 16:49
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i love it. that is one of the best short poems i have read in a long time. i have always thought that good short poetry is generally much more powerful than good long poetry, and you have just gone and proved it for me. thanks for writing this - made my day
Neo Comment by: Neo - 2007-02-16 08:13
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You're never damned in God's eyes no matter what they say.

Nice write.

Never give up.
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